writing

= Writing :=

In writing we have been reading a fairytale and we have been rewriting it in a different characters perspective. I have done Hansel and Gretel in the witches perspective. Here is my re-written fairytale perspective....


 * Once upon a time, there lived a witch that hadn’t eaten in for 500 years. She had a house made of pure lollies. Then once she was brewing a potion to foresee things. Then in the potion she saw two children wandering aimlessly in the forest. She peers out her window and sees the same children she did in her potion. Then she did the most evilest laugh you have ever heard. **


 * The children stared over where they heard the laugh. Then they looked at each other and saw that the house was made out of lollies. So they ran over to the house and started to eat it. The children didn’t care about the evil laugh they heard. All they wanted was the lollies and candy. **
 * “ Who do I hear nibbling on my house, is it me or is it a mouse” the which said in a evil voice. So Hansel and Gretel ( the children) looked at each other and wanted to run. Then the old lady came out and said in a sweet voice “ come in dearies I won’t hurt you”. “I’ll feed you and you can sleep here if you need” the which said as she had a greedy smile on her face. She walked up to hansel and gretel and held their hands then lead them inside. **


 * “ Here’s some chocolate and cream, you guys are very hungry aren't you” the which said. Then Hansel and Gretel ate their desert and went to bed. They woke up in the morning and then the witch came in and took hansel by the arm a locked him in the barn “ HELP ME GRETEL” hansel screamed. Then the which took Gretel by the arm and said in a evil voice “ You are going to be my slave and cook all your brothers food”. The which had the most evilest plan, it was to make hansel so fat and then cook him up. So after days and days of feeding hansel the witch came to feel how fat he was. “ Little boy put a finger out and I will feel how fat you are” said the witch in her old cracked voice. But then Hansel had a plan he knew that the which was a bit blind so he found an old bird leg and put that through the crack instead the old witch felt and and said in the most disappointed voice “Impossible, you should be very fat by now I have been feeding you for weeks”. So the old witch walked to the kitchen and said to gretel “little girl I don’t care how skinny you are you are going into the oven and then your brother is going in after you”. So the witch took Gretel by the arm and pulled her to the oven. Then Gretel had a trick planned. “I can’t fit in there it’s too small for me” said Gretel. “Of course you can I’ve cooked many children in their” said the witch in a sort of disappointed way. so the witch crawled in and said “ see even I can fit in here” **
 * but then Gretel slammed the oven door and turned it on the hottest it could go. Then Gretel ran out to the barn house and let her brother out of it. So hansel jumped out and gave her a huge. “where’s the witch” Hansel said “I tricked her into the oven when she was trying to cook me”. So they both ran home and lived happily ever after. **